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the oldest shards of him and yet
young enough to feel
a centre of steel
below the black surface

digit always steady
on the trigger to snap shut an element
of the soup of light
that makes the night shine

ominously
this is perfectly what he sought
the world-tree skewering the sky and filling
several different kinds of under-realm
the hell
of his ancestors
small demons that grow his hair
what do you look for
what is the final image
to complete your ascending soul

darkness defines light
but where is the glow

of home
midgard
middle england
middle earth

join me
for a light ale
or three
©2006-2010 ~demongeek
:icondemongeek:

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Probably in need of a re-draft.

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:iconbrplevampire:
this is pretty kewl! it makes yah think...i think...lol its good!
:iconozrics-tentacle:
For some reason, I can't help but love this piece... ;)

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The mind alone knows what lies near the heart,
he alone knows his spirit:
no sickness is worse for the wise man
than to have no one to love him


~Havamal

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~Ravishing-Grimness
~ozrics-comics
:icondemongeek:
Well, that's a relief... :giggle:

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God was my co-pilot, but we crashed in the mountains and I had to eat him. :meditate:
:iconozrics-tentacle:
;)

--
The mind alone knows what lies near the heart,
he alone knows his spirit:
no sickness is worse for the wise man
than to have no one to love him


~Havamal

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~Ravishing-Grimness
~ozrics-comics
:icondark0goddess:
Very well worded and the flow is incredible!

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~For what, we ask, is life without a touch of Poetry in it?~
Co-Administrator of the *Citizens-of-Ai
Administrator *The-Red-Envelope
:icondemongeek:
"Flow" is a tricky thing to get right... hell, it's a difficult thing to even define. :) Glad you like it...

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God was my co-pilot, but we crashed in the mountains and I had to eat him. :meditate:
:icondark0goddess:
This is very true!

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~For what, we ask, is life without a touch of Poetry in it?~
Co-Administrator of the *Citizens-of-Ai
Administrator *The-Red-Envelope

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